Thursday, December 19, 2013

Lord of the Flies Chapter One (Sound of the Shell) to Chapter Six (Beast from Air)

1. Before reading spend five minutes writing about the first 24 hours of the O'Maley Experiment* . Share this writing with me in a document called "LotF O'Maley Experiment."

2. Read and take notes on the first six chapter of Lord of the Flies (pages 7-108).

Take notes on the following characters and visual motifs (symbols) in relation to the essential questions below them:
Significant recurring characters
(as determined by last year's students)

Piggy
Simon
Jack
Ralph
Roger
Sam and Eric

Robert, Maurice, Bill

Littluns: boy with mulberry birthmark, Johnny, Percival, Henry

Take notes on how the characters are first introduced, how they are described, what they say,  what they think, what they do, what others say about them.

What conflicts--internal and external--are the characters involved in?

How do the characters change, evolve, develop?

How might the descriptions, actions, thoughts, changes be allegorical (symbolic)?

What does all of this have to do with the big questions about human existence that the novel explores?
Significant visual motifs
(as determined by last year's students)
* Glasses/specs
* Butterflies (and/or maybe other small creatures)
* Fire
* Conch/shell
* Pigs/boar/sow/Lord of the Flies
* Places on the island (places of power, Simon's place, the "scar") 
* Vegetation on the island: creepers, candle buds
* Painted faces/mask
* Other aspects of the boys' appearance: hair, clothing
* Shelters/hut
* Rock
* Stick sharpened at both ends
*Beast(s)/monster(s)

Take notes on how the visual motifs are first introduced, how they are described, how they are used, what characters say about them, what characters think about them. (Notice the motifs in the chapter titles!)

What conflicts--internal and external--are the motifs involved in? 

How do the visual motifs change, evolve, develop?

How might the descriptions, uses, and thoughts about the motifs be allegorical (symbolic)?

What does all of this have to do with the big questions about human existence that the novel explores?


Essential questions

William Golding said, "I believe man suffers from an appalling ignorance of his own nature." What is human nature (in your view, in Golding's view)? If we are ignorant of our own nature as Golding claims, what effect does that ignorance have on lives (your life, the lives in the novel)? Can we replace ignorance with understanding? How? (What does your experience suggest? What does the novel suggest?)

William Golding wrote that the theme of Lord of the Flies "is an attempt to trace back the defects of society to the defects of human nature...the shape of society must depend on the ethical nature of the individual and not on any political system." What does Golding mean by "defects in society" and "defects in human nature"? How do defects in our nature create defects in our civilization? (Consider the world outside the novel and inside the novel.) What can be done about these defects? (What do you think? What does the novel suggest?)

Key words/concepts to use to create your own essential question:
fear / control / reason / charisma / intuition / impulse / cruelty / kindness / needs / desires / hope / pessimism / extroversion / introversion / power / responsibility / violence / isolation / connection / ignorance / understanding / order / chaos
[I took these words from the discussion we had about the O'Maley experiment added a few of my own]

3. Be prepared for a simple quiz about setting, plot, characters, and visual motifs (symbols) in relation to themes on January 2 and/or 3. (Chapter titles can be very helpful to organize your thoughts about the book.)

4. Prepare for a Socratic Seminar on January 2 and 3. Do the following and share it with me in a document entitled "LotF Socratic Seminar chapters 1-6". Plagiarism (copying or paraphrasing other people's ideas) will result in a zero on this assignment. 

  • Choose an essential question from above that Lord of the Flies addresses or use the words above to create an essential question of your own. 

  • Choose a character that Golding uses to explore the question. [It is often very rewarding to write about the less obvious characters.]
  • Find four or more passages in the novel in which Golding uses the development of the character to explore the question. Include page numbers.
  • Further prepare for the discussion by explaining how Golding uses the character to explore the question in each passage.

  • Choose a visual motif that Golding uses to explore the question. [It is often very rewarding to write about the less obvious visual motifs.]
  • Find four or more passages in the novel in which Golding uses the development of the visual motif to explore the question. Include page numbers.
  • Further prepare for the discussion by explaining how Golding uses the visual motif to explore the question in each passage.

Tuesday, December 17, 2013

Directing Hamlet Assignment

Complete the following project by Friday, December 20.


Directing Hamlet Assignment
You are applying to be the director of a new film version of Hamlet set to begin production in 2014. After studying parts of several versions of Hamlet you have begun work on an application consisting of (1) a screenplay excerpt based on a passage you’ve chosen from the play, (2) a proposal explaining your choices (including proposed actors), and (3) a visual representation of some significant aspect of your screenplay excerpt.
Additional Directions (READ THE DIRECTIONS)
(1) screenplay excerpt:
Turn the excerpt you have chosen into a screenplay with interpolated film directions about elements such as setting, movement, speaking, facial expression, sound, music, camera shot selection, etc. Use the screenplay format. (See screenplay format handouts. You might also be interested in looking at parts of Kenneth Branagh's screenplay.)

(2) proposal:
Write a proposal to the producers of Hamlet 2014.
Overall
* The first section will provide an overview of your vision for a complete, new Hamlet. Consider visual style and setting, acting choices and character depictions, edits to (and versions of) Shakespeare's script, etc. Consider how these choices will contribute to a particular interpretation of the play's meaning and to a particular effect on the audience. (Here's a website where someone named Ulrike Bohm has explained ideas for a screenplay. I don't expect your explanation to be this lengthy but exemplary explanations will be equally thoughtful. See rubric below.)
* The second section will explain specific, meaningful ways your Hamlet will differ from and/or build upon famous productions of Hamlet by the likes of Olivier, Zeffirelli, Branagh, Almereyda, and Doran.
The Excerpted Passage
* The third section will explain and justify the choices you've made in the screenplay excerpt. Consider setting descriptions, camera shot selection, acting directions, sounds and music, etc. How do the choices help you express your interpretation of the scene and its significance?; 
* The fourth section will explain and justify choices in your visual representation of the selected passage. (How do the choices you've made help you express your interpretation of the scene and its significance?) If you consulted any sources to help you understand visual components of film making, such as storyboards, costuming, lighting, blocking, etc. discuss those sources here.
Overall (again)
* The fifth section will explain and justify other choices for your Hamlet. Consider actors and a soundtrack for example. What other elements might be worth highlighting in your proposal?
* Conclude in the sixth section with a summarizing, final pitch to the film producers: convince them to choose you.

(3) visual representation:
Your visual representation could be a storyboard1, costume sketches, stage/film lighting scheme2, stage/film blocking scheme3, live performance, demo film4. The visual representation will be assessed for choices, clarity, care, and creativity.
1 A storyboard is a series of illustrations (or other images) used to depict a film (or other moving) sequence before the production of the actual film (or other moving sequence). Do some research for directions, examples, and advice.
2 A theatre/film lighting scheme is a plan for the use of lights (what type and color, where, and when) during a performance or during filming. Do some research for directions, examples, and advice.
3 A blocking scheme is a plan for the movement (where, when, and how) of actors during a performance. Do some research for directions examples and advice.
4 See me if you are interested in this option.

All of this is due by the end of the school day Friday, December 20*.[Assessment worth two end-of-unit grades.]
 
* You may ask for an extension on the visual representation but must still complete the script excerpt and proposal (including including section four in which you explain your visual element).
 
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Hamlet Screenplay Project
Grading Rubric

Proposal (40%)
The following elements should be developed persuasively with description, detail, and explanation: vision for film as a whole, comparison with other film versions, explanation of screenplay on a single passage, explanation of visual component, other film considerations (actors, music, etc.), and final pitch. The writing should demonstrate a lively, mature style and shows command of standard English conventions.

Advanced: Persuasive development of elements; vivid, meticulous writing
Proficient: Reasonable development; clear writing with few errors
Adequate: General development; clear writing with several errors
Needs Improvement: Partial, incomplete development; errors detract from clarity

Screenplay/Script (30%)
Visual directions and acting directions should be inventive and demonstrate an understanding of the passage. Screenplay conventions and English language conventions should be followed with attention and care.

Advanced: Visual and acting directions are inventive, vivid, dramatic, suggestive, and revealing. Writing shows a command of style, syntax, diction; use of format is accurate and meticulous.
Proficient: Directions include vivid and revealing moments. Writing and formatting are not quite ready for formal presentation to potential producers, but show evidence of attention and care.
Adequate: Enough appropriate directions and setting directions for the reader to picture the scene. The writing is clear but contains several errors in writing and/or script conventions.
Needs improvement: The script contains some plausible directions but too few to constitute a viable screenplay. Errors in writing and formatting conventions detract from clarity.

Visual element (30%)
The visual element should, like the screenplay, be inventive and demonstrate an understanding of the passage. It should be substantial, perhaps even ambitious, and should be produced with attention and care.

Advanced: The visual element is vivid, inventive, insightful, revealing, and suggestive. The visual element is ambitious and was produced with substantial care and is ready to be shared with potential producers.
Proficient: Overall, the visual element is appropriate and includes vivid and revealing aspects. The visual element is substantial and was produced with care and could be made ready for a presentation to producers with some additional work.
Adequate: The visual element is accurate and appropriate overall but with less invention and insight. The visual element could be presented in an emergency with out embarrassment.
Needs improvement: The visual element contains some implausible, inaccurate, or inappropriate elements. Or, perhaps it shows too little evidence of understanding.  It was produced hastily and sloppily, needing substantial improvement before a presentation.
 

Friday, December 13, 2013

Important Reminders about Hamlet End-of-Unit Work

Very important note #1:
Several students have not shared thread discussion preparation responses with me. (Click here for directions.) This end of unit activity is culmination of a lot of work on your threads and, therefore, counts toward the "end of unit assessment" part of your grade (70%). Not turning in these notes will have a significant impact on your grade.

Very important note #2:
By now you should be familiar with the Director Hamlet assignment due Friday, December 20 which is a week from today. (Click here and then scroll to number 4.) You should have a plan about how you are going to complete all of the components over the next seven nights. By next Tuesday (which is the next chance we'll have to talk in class because of the in-class essay on Monday) you should have finished about half of the project. Be prepared to share your progress. Email me with any questions you have as you work on this project between now and Tuesday.

Very important note #3
Don't forget to bring* the prompt and annotated passage with you to class on Monday. I will not read essays that are not accompanied by annotated passages. 

*(in shared electronic form or in paper form)

Very important note #3b
When planning your essay consider...
* an engaging opening with a big, thematic idea that leads into the thesis (like the one you created for your Jamaica Kincaid essay)
* a bold, daring, insightful thesis that addresses the prompt (strategies and theme).

* How will you organize your paragraphs? By strategy? By section of the passage? By character within the passage? (This was an interesting idea in C-block.) Other?
* How will you weave in supporting quotations? (Remember to cite act, line, and scene. Remember to use a slash for line breaks.)

* if time permits, end by returning anew to your bold, daring, insightful thesis. Then, help the reader understand why the thesis matters: this is often accomplished by returning to the opening big, thematic idea. 

a possibly important note #3c
If you're struggling with strategies (or techniques), here is a list (posted on last year's blog) of figures of speech in Hamlet. Each is defined and accompanied by at least one example from Hamlet.  Strategies (or techniques) can also be found in the Hamlet Review sheet.

If you're interested in learning a bit more about syntax-related strategies click here and scroll down. You'll find a note about periodic sentences and "balanced" (or parallel) sentences (including antithesis). I mention this because one of you asked about the parallel structure in Polonius' advice to Laertes.  (My favorite kind of balanced sentence is chiasma. The balance is turned inside out. ) 
 

Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Hamlet End-of-Unit Assessments

End-of-Unit (Summative) Assessments for Hamlet

1.  Thread Writing and Discussion
Participate in the thread discussion on Tuesday, December 10. Share Preparation directions for the thread activity can be found here. [Assessment worth one end-of-unit grade.]

2. Test
Take the Hamlet test on Thursday, December 12. Review for the Hamlet test can be found here. [Assessment worth one end-of-unit grade.]

3. In-Class Passage Analysis (Q2) Essay
Write a passage analysis essay during class on Friday, December 13 on Monday, December 16. Bring an annotated passage of your choice* (100 to 200 lines, give or take) to class on Friday, December 13. Annotate with the prompt in mind. Pay particular attention to how particular literary strategies contribute to thematic development in the passage. In other words, make sure you apply what you've learned about literary strategies to your analysis of the passage. Don't just point out the strategies but explain how they're thematically significant.
* You cannot choose Hamlet's soliloquies in 1.2, 2.2, 3.1, or 4.4.
[Assessment worth one end-of-unit grade.]

Here's the prompt:
AP English Language Q2/AP English Literature Q2 Style Essay
Choose a passage from Hamlet that is rich in content and style. Write a formal essay in which you explain how William Shakespeare’s use of literary strategies in the passage contributes to the play's exploration of how the human mind concocts a range of responses to the inherent imperfections of the world: deceit, corruption, loss, mortality, and uncertainty.

4. Directing Hamlet Project
Complete the following project by Friday, December 20.

Directing Hamlet Assignment
You are applying to be the director of a new film version of Hamlet set to begin production in 2014. After studying parts of several versions of Hamlet you have begun work on an application consisting of (1) a screenplay excerpt based on a passage you’ve chosen from the play, (2) a proposal explaining your choices (including proposed actors), and (3) a visual representation of some significant aspect of your screenplay excerpt.
Additional Directions (READ THE DIRECTIONS)

(1) screenplay excerpt:
Turn the excerpt you have chosen into a screenplay with interpolated film directions about elements such as setting, movement, speaking, facial expression, sound, music, camera shot selection, etc. Use the screenplay format. (See screenplay format handouts.)

(2) proposal:
Write a proposal to the producers of Hamlet 2014.
Overall
* The first section will provide an overview of your vision for a complete, new Hamlet. Consider visual style and setting, acting choices and character depictions, edits to (and versions of) Shakespeare's script, etc. Consider how these choices will contribute to a particular interpretation of the play's meaning and to a particular effect on the audience.
* The second section will explain specific, meaningful ways your Hamlet will differ from and/or build upon famous productions of Hamlet by the likes of Olivier, Zeffirelli, Branagh, Almereyda, and Doran.
The Excerpted Passage
* The third section will explain and justify the choices you've made in the screenplay excerpt. Consider setting descriptions, camera shot selection, acting directions, sounds and music, etc. How do the choices help you express your interpretation of the scene and its significance?; 
* The fourth section will explain and justify choices in your visual representation of the selected passage. (How do the choices you've made help you express your interpretation of the scene and its significance?) If you consulted any sources to help you understand visual components of film making, such as storyboards, costuming, lighting, blocking, etc. discuss those sources here.
Overall (again)
* The fifth section will explain and justify other choices for your Hamlet. Consider actors and a soundtrack for example. What other elements might be worth highlighting in your proposal?
* Conclude in the sixth section with a summarizing, final pitch to the film producers: convince them to choose you.

(3) visual representation:
Your visual representation could be a storyboard1, costume sketches, stage/film lighting scheme2, stage/film blocking scheme3, live performance, demo film4. The visual representation will be assessed for choices, clarity, care, and creativity.

1 A storyboard is a series of illustrations (or other images) used to depict a film (or other moving) sequence before the production of the actual film (or other moving sequence). Do some research for directions, examples, and advice.
2 A theatre/film lighting scheme is a plan for the use of lights (what type and color, where, and when) during a performance or during filming. Do some research for directions, examples, and advice.
3 A blocking scheme is a plan for the movement (where, when, and how) of actors during a performance. Do some research for directions examples and advice.
4 See me if you are interested in this option.

All of this is due by the end of the school day Friday, December 20.[Assessment worth two end-of-unit grades.]

Thursday, December 5, 2013

Hamlet Act Five

1. Read and take notes on 5.1. Pay particular attention to how this scene deals with questions of human mortality (death). Notice how the scene deals with a range of responses to human mortality (death) by moving from sharp humor, to thoughtful consideration, to outward grief. How does each section work? Where do the shifts occur? Why might Shakespeare have structured the scene this way and why might he have placed this scene immediately before the tragic end? These are ideas and questions to consider while reading and taking notes. (Don't forget your motif/thread.) Due Friday (12/6)

2. Read and take notes on 5.2. Pay particular attention to how various plot, motif, and theme threads get woven together in the end. Consider the relationship of how people die to
Due Monday (12/9).

3. In a Google Document labelled "Following a Thread in Hamlet" do the following:

Write down your motif.
Write down the act, scene, line of every place you noticed your motif in the play. (If you'd like you can copy this from your notes. If you're thin on notes: Here you'll find searchable text. (Click on the act then search for words related to your motif within each act.)

Write down a quotation from act one that develops your motif. (Include act, scene, and line.)
Write a thorough explanation of what the quotation means (in context) and how the quotation develops the significance of the motif.

Write down a quotation from act two that develops your motif. (Include act, scene, and line.)
Write a thorough explanation of what the quotation means (in context) and how the quotation develops the significance of the motif.

Write down a quotation from act three that develops your motif. (Include act, scene, and line.)
Write a thorough explanation of what the quotation means (in context) and how the quotation develops the significance of the motif.

Write down a quotation from act four that develops your motif. (Include act, scene, and line.)
Write a thorough explanation of what the quotation means (in context) and how the quotation develops the significance of the motif.

Write down a quotation from act five that develops your motif. (Include act, scene, and line.)
Write a thorough explanation of what the quotation means (in context) and how the quotation develops the significance of the motif.

Then explain the development and significance of the motif in play overall. Use quotations and other details to support your explanation.(These were often underdeveloped in the act 1-2 responses.)

Due Monday (12/9) Tuesday 12/10.

Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Hamlet Act Four

1. By Monday class time, read and take notes on 4.1 through 4.4.33. (This is about seven pages.)
Pay particular attention to Hamlet's punning wit in response to Rosencrantz and Guildenstern (4.2) and Claudius (4.3). What threads and themes are present in Hamlet's word play?
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2. By Monday class time, read the final soliloquy. Use the notes here and in your book. Answer the three questions in Google Doc labelled appropriately and shared with me. (No soliloquy performance comparison this time.)

Hamlet Soliloquy 4.4


How all occasions do inform against me, (35)
And spur my dull revenge! What is a man,
If his chief good and market of his time
Be but to sleep and feed? a beast, no more.
Sure, he that made us with such large discourse,
Looking before and after, gave us not (40)
That capability and god-like reason
To fust in us unused. Now, whether it be
Bestial oblivion, or some craven scruple
Of thinking too precisely on the event,
A thought which, quarter'd, hath but one part wisdom (45)
And ever three parts coward, I do not know
Why yet I live to say 'This thing's to do;'
Sith I have cause and will and strength and means
To do't. Examples gross as earth exhort me:
Witness this army of such mass and charge (50)
Led by a delicate and tender prince,
Whose spirit with divine ambition puff'd
Makes mouths at the invisible event,
Exposing what is mortal and unsure
To all that fortune, death and danger dare, (55)
Even for an egg-shell. Rightly to be great
Is not to stir without great argument,
But greatly to find quarrel in a straw
When honour's at the stake
. How stand I then,
That have a father kill'd, a mother stain'd, (60)
Excitements of my reason and my blood,
And let all sleep? while, to my shame, I see
The imminent death of twenty thousand men,
That, for a fantasy and trick of fame,
Go to their graves like beds, fight for a plot (65)
Whereon the numbers cannot try the cause,
Which is not tomb enough and continent
To hide the slain?
 O, from this time forth,
My thoughts be bloody, or be nothing worth!

NOTES
[Source: http://shakespeare.about.com/od/studentresources/a/allinform.htm  Amanda Mabillard, B.A. (Honors) is a freelance writer specializing in Shakespeare, Renaissance political theory, theatre history, comparative literary history, and linguistic topics in Renaissance literature.]

inform against ] Accuse me.
market ] Employment.
discourse ] The power of reason. God gave human beings the ability to reflect on life's events.
Looking before and after ] Our intelligence allows us to analyze past experiences and make rational judgments about the future.
fust ] Grow mouldy. Hamlet is saying that God did not give us the power of reason for it to go unused.
Bestial oblivion ] The forgetfulness of an animal. Our capability to remember separates mankind from other animals or "beasts". But Hamlet forgetting Claudius's deeds is clearly not why he delays the murder.
craven scruple ] Cowardly feelings.
of ] From.
event ] Outcome.
quarter'd ] Meticulously analyzed (literally, divided into four).
Sith ] Since.
gross ] Obvious.
mass and charge ] Size and cost. Hamlet is referring to the army led by Fortinbras, prince of Norway. Hamlet wishes he had Fortinbras's courage.
puff'd ] Inflated.
Makes mouths at the invisible event ] Shows contempt for (or cares not about) the uncertain outcome of battle.
Rightly to be great...stake ] Truly great men refrain from fighting over insignificant things, but they will fight without hesitation over something trivial when their honour is at risk. "True nobility of soul is to restrain one's self unless there is a great cause for resentment, but nobly to recognize even a trifle as such as cause when honour is involved" (Kittredge 121). Ironically, "Hamlet never learns from the Captain or attempts to clarify what the specific issue of honor is that motivates the Prince of Norway. In fact, there is none, for the play has made it clear that Fortinbras's uncle, after discovering and stopping his nephew's secret and illegal revenge campaign against Claudius, encouraged him to use newly levied forces to fight in Poland...Since no issue of honor is to be found in Fortinbras's cause, Hamlet, through his excessive desire to emulate the Norwegian leader, ironically calls into question whether there is any honour in his own cause" (Newell 143). [Mr. Cook adds: or, perhaps, Hamlet’s mind has once again moved from the particular (Fortinbras and his army) to the abstract (consideration of what defines greatness). It seems Fortinbras and his army are not important in and of themselves but in how they “inform against” (indict, critique, etc.) Hamlet’s inaction.]
twenty thousand men ] In line 25, it was 20000 ducats and only 2000 men. It is undecided whether this confusion is Hamlet's or Shakespeare's.
blood ] Passions.
trick of fame ] Trifle of reputation. But is not Hamlet jealous of Fortinbras and his ability to fight in defense of his honour? "Fortinbras is enticed by a dream, and thousands must die for it. Hamlet's common sense about the absurdity of Fortinbras's venture shows the pointlessness of his envy" (Edwards 193).
Whereon...slain ] The cause is not significant enough to consume the thousands of men fighting over it, and the tombs and coffins are not plentiful enough to hold those who are killed (continent = container).

Use first name and last initial. Number each of your responses.
1.        (Make connections!) In a well-developed paragraph compare what Hamlet says in lines 36-49 of this soliloquy to what he says in lines 91-96 of his “To be or not to be” soliloquy (below). Begin your paragraph with a bold, insightful assertion comparing the two soliloquies. Develop the assertion by citing specific language from both soliloquies. End by reaffirming your bold insight.

Thus conscience does make cowards of us all;
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pitch and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry, (95)
And lose the name of action.—

2.        (Make connections!) In a well-developed paragraph compare this soliloquy with the “O What a rogue and peasant slave” (2.2.576) soliloquy. (Think about the role that Fortinbras plays in this speech and that the First Player plays in the earlier speech: “What would he do,  / Had he the motive and the cue for passion / That I have?”) Begin your paragraph with a bold, insightful assertion comparing the two soliloquies. Develop the assertion by citing specific language from both soliloquies. End by reaffirming your bold insight.

3.        (What’s your opinion?) Hamlet contrasts his own cowardly thought with the actions of Fortinbras. Do you think Fortinbras is a good role model for Hamlet? In other words, should Hamlet be more like Fortinbras or not? Explain your answer in a paragraph. Use evidence from the play and this soliloquy to develop your answer. (Like Hamlet, you might be able to argue “yes” in someways and “no” in others.) Begin by asserting your position. Develop your position. Cite and explain specific evidence from this soliloquy and from elsewhere in the text to support your position.

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4. Read and take notes on 4.5 through 4.7 (16 pages). Due by Wednesday class time. 
In addition to your motif/thread* notes and your general notes (on plot, characterization, and themes) pay particular attention to how Shakespeare uses songs and flower imagery to convey Ophelia's response to trauma and tragedy. You'll need this understanding for the next assignment. Also, of interest is how Laertes responds to his father's death. Understand how Laertes is a foil for Hamlet. 

*(You likely have more than a dozen instances of the motif/thread now. You'll need these threads after act five.)
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5. Ophelia Speaks 
Due by Thursday class time. Share a Google Doc labelled "Ophelia Speaks".
Click here to view Ophelia performances. (Scroll down.)
Click here to read some Ophelia speeches written by eleventh grade honors students in 2009-2012. (The Ophelia speeches are mixed in with blog posts about threads/motifs.)

A possible process
If you get stuck try first writing what you would say if you were in Ophelia situation. (You wrote about her situation in class today so consult that.)
Then, find places where you could add flower imagery and references to songs (songs as a metaphor, song lyrics from 4.5, other songs of the time period or later).
Then, prepare for writing in iambic pentameter by reading a page of poetry in Hamlet without worrying about the meaning. Consult the note below that explains iambic pentameter. Then, look at the example. Try it yourself. (At worst you should be able to write two lines with ten syllables.)
Finally, check to make sure you have completed all of the directions.

Directions.
Role: You are a playwright commissioned by a theatrical troupe to create a soliloquy (or monologue or letter written by Ophelia) that will be inserted into Hamlet.

Audience: Readers and viewers of Hamlet who want to understand Ophelia more deeply.

Format:       1. a soliloquy (or monologue)

                   2. 14+ lines*

3. The lines conclude with a rhyming couplet in iambic pentameter. (*The other 12 or more lines may be in prose or in iambic pentameter# [blank verse).)

4. Try to use Elizabethan language (diction and syntax), or use language that does not stand out as obviously modern.

5. State where in the play you would insert the soliloquy (or monologue). (Would you create a 4.8? Would you place it somewhere in 4.5? Where? Be precise: act, scene, line. You could even, I suppose, create a 4.8 in which she returns as a ghost; or perhaps someone finds a letter she has written or a diary.)

6. Refer to song lyrics and flower imagery (from 4.5).

7. Show Ophelia’s mind puzzling out and wrestling with her dramatic situation and inner consciousness (just as Hamlet does in his soliloquies).

Topic: What Ophelia is thinking and feeling at the moment in the play into which you decide to insert her soliloquy?


# Much of Hamlet is written in blank verse meaning most lines do not rhyme but they do follow a particularmeter (a pattern of unstressed and stressed syllables). The meter is called iambic pentameter. “Iambic” means unstressed syllables are followed by stressed syllables: “And makes us rather bear those ills we have”.Pentameter means there are five iambs.

“…And makes us rather bear those ills we have,
than fly to others that we know not of…”

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Hamlet Act Three

1. Write an explication of Hamlet's 3.1 soliloquy/monologue. Label this "3.1 Soliloquy Explication" and share your Google Doc with me. You explanation must work through the soliloquy sentence by sentence, explaining not only the what Hamlet is saying but also analyzing how Hamlet says it. Consider what is significant about and what is suggested by specific figurative imagery, sentence structures, shifts in focus, pronouns, variations in rhythm, etc. Also, consider particulars in this soliloquy/monologue in relation to the rest of the play. Due by class time on Friday.

Note: 3.1 Make sure that your explication of the "to be or not to be" speech analyzes both what each sentence means and how each sentence conveys that meaning with rhetorical strategies. Make sure your explication does not incorporate interpretations borrowed from sources other than the notes provided to you. Uncited paraphrases of other people's analyses is plagiarism and will result in a zero, a call home, and notification of the assistant principal.
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 To be, or not to be: that is the question (3.1.64-98).

To be, or not to be: that is the question:
Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to suffer (65)
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles,
And by opposing end them? To die: to sleep;
No more; and by a sleep to say we end
The heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks (70)
That flesh is heir to, 'tis a consummation
Devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep;
To sleep: perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub;
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, (75)
Must give us pause: there's the respect
That makes calamity of so long life;
For who would bear the whips and scorns of time,
The oppressor's wrong, the proud man's contumely,
The pangs of despised love, the law's delay, (80)
The insolence of office and the spurns
That patient merit of the unworthy takes,
When he himself might his quietus make
With a bare bodkin? who would fardels bear,
To grunt and sweat under a weary life, (85)
But that the dread of something after death,
The undiscover'd country from whose bourn
No traveller returns, puzzles the will
And makes us rather bear those ills we have
Than fly to others that we know not of? (90)
Thus conscience does make cowards of us all;
And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought,
And enterprises of great pitch and moment
With this regard their currents turn awry, (95)
And lose the name of action.-- Soft you now!
The fair Ophelia! Nymph, in thy orisons
Be all my sins remember'd.
NOTES: [Source: http://shakespeare.about.com/od/studentresources/a/tobeornot.htm  Amanda Mabillard, B.A. (Honors) is a freelance writer specializing in Shakespeare, Renaissance political theory, theatre history, comparative literary history, and linguistic topics in Renaissance literature.]
slings ] Some argue that "slings" is a misprint of the intended word, "stings". "The stings of fortune" was a common saying in the Renaissance. But in the context of the soliloquy, "slings" likely means "sling-shot" or "missile". This seems in keeping with the reference to "arrows" - both can do great harm.
outrageous fortune ] Fortune is "outrageous" in that it is brazenly defiant.
And by opposing end them ] If you cannot suffer the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune" then you must end your troubles with suicide. [Mr. Cook’s note: other critics read this phrase more broadly.]
consummation ] Final settlement of all matters.
rub ] Impediment. The term comes from bowling, where the "rub" is any obstacle the pushes the ball off course.
shuffled off this mortal coil ] To separate from one's body (mortal coil = body).
respect ] Consideration.
of so long life ] So long-lived.
time ] Time = temporal life.
his quietus make ] Settle his own account.
bare bodkin ] A "mere dagger". Bodkin was a Renaissance term used to describe many different sharp instruments, but it makes the most sense here to assume Shakespeare means a dagger.
fardels ] Burdens.
No traveller returns ] Since Hamlet has already encountered his father's ghost, and thus proof of the afterlife, this line has raised much debate. There are four major current theories regarding this line: 1) Shakespeare made an egregious error and simply failed to reconcile the appearance of the ghost and Hamlet's belief that human beings do not return; 2) Hamlet has earlier revealed that he doubts the authenticity of the ghost and, therefore, he does not believe his father has truly returned; 3) Hamlet is referring only to human beings returning in the flesh and not as mere shadows of their former selves; 4) the entire soliloquy is misplaced and rightfully belongs before Hamlet has met his father's ghost. In my estimation, theory #4 seems the most plausible.
bourn ] Limit or boundary.
native hue of resolution ] Natural. Here Hamlet refers to the "natural color of courage".
pale cast of thought ] Sickly tinge of contemplation.
great pitch and moment ] Of momentous significance. The "pitch" was the name given to the highest point in a falcon's flight before it dives down to catch its prey.
With this regard their currents turn awry ] A reference to the sea and its tides: "Because of their thoughts, their currents become unstable".
Soft you now ] "But hush!". Hamlet hears Ophelia begin to pray and he must cut short his private ponderances.
Nymph ] See commentary below.
orisons ] Prayers.

2. Write a shuttle comparison of two performances of Hamlet's 3.1 soliloquy/monologue. Put this in the comments below. Use your first name and last initial please. Remember to begin with a bold insight about meaningful similarities and/or differences. Then, develop that insight by explaining very specific acting and directing choices. Due by class time on Monday.

First clip: 3.1 monologue, directed by Kenneth Branagh, Hamlet played by Kenneth Branagh (1996)
[(1) Here the monologue is in context as it appears in the second quarto and first folio. (2) I know what you're going to ask. The answer is one-way mirror.]

Second clip: 3.1 soliloquy, directed by Franco Zeffirelli, Hamlet played by Mel Gibson (1990)
[Here the soliloquy is lifted out of its context in 3.1 and delivered on its own. Hamlet walks down into the catacombs where his father and others are buried.]

Third clip: 3.1 soliloquy, directed by Michael Almereyda, Hamlet played by Ethan Hawke (2000)
[Here again the soliloquy is lifted out of its context in 3.1 and delivered on its own, but this time Hamlet is in a Blockbuster video store. Why?, you ask. Because in this version Hamlet creates the Mousetrap by editing clips of film into a montage depicting something like the murder of his father. He's in Blockbuster looking for film clips to include in his montage.]

Fourth clip: 3.1 soliloquy, directed by Gregory Doran, Hamlet played by David Tennant (2009)
[Here the monologue is in context again. I chose an edit of this speech that shows a little bit of the context at the beginning and end of the speech.]

Fifth clip: 3.1 soliloquy, directed by Laurence Olivier, Hamlet played by Laurence Olivier (1948)
[Out of the 3.1. again but with suggestive water imagery that plays off of lines in the speech and elsewhere in the play.]

3. Pick one option (300+ word response)

Option #1 Write a shuttle comparison of two performances of "The Murder of Gonzago" ("the Mousetrap").  Remember to begin with a bold insight about meaningful similarities and/or differences. When comparing consider Hamlet's behavior, the play-within-the-play itself, and the reactions of Ophelia, Gertrude, and Claudius. Then, develop that insight by explaining very specific acting and directing choices. Put this in the comments below. Use your first name and last initial please. Due by class time Tuesday.

Option #2. Write a mini-essay explaining in detail how director Michael Almereyda's "Mouse Trap" uses clips of film to express Hamlet's feelings about his mother and to attempt to "catch the conscience of the king." Then, evaluate how effectively the collaged film conveys the ideas expressed in Shakespeare's text. Put this in the comments below. Use your first name and last initial please. Due by class time Tuesday.

Option #3. Write a mini-essay explaining how you would improve one of the versions (your choice) with very specific directorial and acting choices. Defend your choices. Explain exactly how your changes would improve the scene. Put this in the comments below. Use your first name and last initial please. Due by class time Tuesday.

First Clip: 3.2 "Murder of Gonzago," directed by Kenneth Branagh, Hamlet played by Kenneth Branagh, Ophelia played by Kate Winslet, Gertrude played by Julie Christie, Claudius played by Derek Jacobi (1996) [The full text is performed but in a Victorian rather than Elizabethan setting. Click here for more on the style of Branagh's Hamlet, here for more on Victorian theatre, here for more on the Victorian era.]

Second Clip: 3.2 "Murder of Gonzago," directed by Franco Zeffirelli, Hamlet played by Mel Gibson, Ophelia played by Helena Bonham Carter, Gertrude played by Glenn Close, Claudius played by Alan Bates (1990)
[This clip begins with Hamlet's line "You shall see anon how the murderer gets the love of Gonzago's wife" (3.2.289), but instead of this line causing the King to rise, Zeffirelli has the players enact a partial version of the dumb show here. Prior to the beginning of this clip the Player King and the Player Queen--both played by men in the Elizabethan tradition--have exchanged a heavily cut version of the lines written for the occasion by Hamlet. Hamlet has also already spoken to Ophelia ("May I lie my head upon your lap") and Gertrude ("Madam, how like you this play?"). His manner, prior to the clip, is strangely playful (or playfully strange) and visibly anxious, perhaps an adult indulging in adolescent childishness.]

Third Clip: 3.2 "Mouse Trap," abridged, is directed by Michael Almereyda. Ethan Hawke plays Hamlet, Julia Stiles plays Ophelia, Diana Venora plays Gertrude, Kyle MacLachlan plays Claudius. (2000)
[Almereyda sets his Hamlet in mid-1990s Manhattan. Prior to this scene we have watched Hamlet visiting Blockbuster Video and editing film into a collage. Prior to the clip when Hamlet says "May I lie my head upon your lap" Ophelia pushes him away.] 

Fourth Clip / Fourth Clip part 2: 3.2 "Murder of Gonzago, abridged, is directed by Gregory Doran. David Tennant plays Hamlet, Mariah Gale plays Ophelia, Penny Downie plays Gertrude, and Patrick Steward plays Claudius. (2009)
[If you want to skip Hamlet's lecture on acting and his bromantic speech to Horatio, start 3:30 or so into the first clip. The "Murder of Gonzago" ends about 3:30 into the second clip. Doran seems to set the film in a chimerical present day monarchy, mixing modern clothing with pre-modern decor. The Player King and Player Queen's speeches are cut to the essential lines but the scene is otherwise more or less intact.]     

4. Read and take notes on 3.2.297 (the end of the play) through 3.3 for class on Monday. (That's about eight pages.) (When reading 3.3 think of dramatic irony; think of the relationship between thought and action.) Answer the following questions in your Hamlet notes.
3.2 After Claudius ends The Murder of Gonzago how does Hamlet use wit to critique Rosencrantz and Guildenstern then Polonius?
3.3 How does Shakespeare use dramatic irony in this scene to dramatize Hamlet's claim that "conscience does make cowards of us all/And thus the native hue of resolution/is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought"? (In other words, how does the dramatic irony in this scene show how the impulse to act can be weakened by thought?)

5. Now read 3.4 and answer the following questions in your Hamlet notes.
How does William Shakespeare use dramatic irony early in the scene? How is this a turning point in the play?
How does Shakespeare use specific figurative imagery to characterize Hamlet's feelings toward his mother and her feelings toward Hamlet?